Iâve sometimes wondered if this effect was intentional: a sort of apologia from Turgenev for his own lack of craft. If we are moved, Turgenev has, via this story that claims that emotional power is the highest aim of art and can be obtained even in the face of clumsy craft, demonstrated that very thing.
Which would be, you knowâpretty great craft.
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Again, Chekhovâs instinct seems to be toward variation, against stasis. One of his gifts is an ability to naturally impose variety on a situation that a lesser writer would leave static.
When a writer subjects us to a non-normative eventâa physical implausibility, the use of markedly elevated language (or markedly vernacular language), or a series of lengthy digressions in a Russian pub in which the people keep freezing in midaction for several pages so that each can be described at length, in turnâhe pays a price: our reading energy drops. (We get suspicious and resistant.) But if it doesnât drop fatally, and if, later, we see that this was all part of the planâif what seemed a failure of craft turns out to be integral to the storyâs meaning (that is, it seems that he âmeant to do thatâ)âthen all is forgiven and we might even understand the profitable exploitation of that apparent excess as a form of virtuosity.
Again, specificity makes character. Turgenev has the contractor sing in a specific way (heâs a âshredder,â in guitar terms, amazing his audience via technical prowess), and through this, the contractor became a particular guy, and now stands for something.
This is a big moment for any artist (this moment of combined triumph and disappointment), when we have to decide whether to accept a work of art that we have to admit we werenât in control of as we made it and of which weâre not entirely sure we approve. It is less, less than we wanted it to be, and yet itâs more, tooâitâs small and a bit pathetic, judged against the work of the great masters, but there it is, all ours.
We often discuss art this way: the artist had something he wanted to express, and then he just, you know, expressed it. That is, we buy into some version of the intentional fallacy: the notion that art is about having a clearcut intention and then condently executing same.
The actual process, in my experience, is much more mysterious and beautiful and more of a pain in the ass to discuss truthfully.