Likewise, as weâll see in a bit, when Tolstoy recounts the thoughts or feelings of his characters, he does this succinctly and precisely, using simple objective sentences that seem factual in their syntax and modesty of assertion.
A fact draws us in. This seems to be one of those âlaws of fictionâ weâve been seeking. âThe car was dented and redâ makes a car appear in the mind. Even more so if the fact is an action: âThe dented red car slowly left the parking lot.â Notice how little we doubt that statement, the spontaneous, involuntary buy-in that makes us forget that there is no car and no parking lot.