Drama is the way of holding the readerâs attention. The basic formula for drama is set-up, build-up, pay-offâjust like a joke. The set-up tells us what the game is. The build-up is where you put in all the moves, the forward motion, where you get all the meat off the turkey. The pay-off answers the question, Why are we here anyway? What is it that youâve been trying to give? Drama must move forward and upward, or the seats on which the audience is sitting will become very hard and uncomfortable. So, in fact, will the audience. And eventually the audience will become impatient, disappointed, and unhappy. There must be movement.
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To review: the fundamental unit of storytelling is a two-part move.
First, the writer creates an expectation: âOnce upon a time, there was a dog with two heads.â In the readerâs mind arises a suite of questions (âDo the heads get along?â âWhat happens at mealtime?â âAre other animals in this world two-headed?â) and the first intimations of what the story might be about (âThe divided self?â âPartisanship?â âOptimism vs. pessimism?â âFriendship?â).
Second, the writer responds to (or âusesâ or âexploitsâ or âhonorsâ) that set of expectations. But not too tightly (using those expectations in a way that feels too linear or phoned in) and not too loosely (taking the story off in some random direction that bears no relation to the expectations it has created).
One time-honored way of creating an expectation: enactment of a pattern.
Plot is the main story of your book or short story. If you are looking for long, brilliant discussions of plot, E. M. Forster and John Gardner have written books in which they discuss it so lucidly and wisely that they will leave you howling like a wolf. I just want to add a few thoughts here, things that I pass on to my students when they seem especially bitter and confused.
Plot grows out of character. If you focus on who the people in your story are, if you sit and write about two people you know and are getting to know better day by day, something is bound to happen.
Avoid contributing material to the drama that is always stretched taut between parents and children; it uses up much of the childrenâs energy and consumes the love of their elders, which is effective and warming even if it does not comprehend. Ask no advice from them and count upon no understanding; but believe in a love that is being stored up for you like an inheritance and trust that in this love there is a strength and a blessing, out beyond which you do not have to step in order to go very far!
Aristotle believed there were four primary dramatic plots: Simple Tragic, Simple Fortunate, Complex Tragic, and Complex Fortunate. Robert McKee, the screenwriting guru, lists twenty-five types of stories in his book: the modern epic, the disillusionment plot, and so on. When we finished sorting through a big pile of inspirational storiesâa much narrower domainâwe came to the conclusion that there are three basic plots: the Challenge plot, the Connection plot, and the Creativity plot.
These three basic plots can be used to classify more than 80 percent of the stories that appear in the original Chicken Soup collection. Perhaps more surprisingly, they can also be used to classify more than 60 percent of the stories published by People magazine about people who arenât celebrities. If an average person makes it into People, itâs usually because he or she has an inspiring story for the rest of us. If our goal is to energize and inspire others, these three plots are the right place to start. (By the way, if youâre a more jaded type of person who finds the Chicken Soup series treacly rather than inspirational, youâll still find value in the three plot templates. You can always turn down the volume on the plots a bit.)
Overall, we found that speed was good. Books, movies, and TV shows with faster plot progression were liked more than their slower-moving counterparts.
Just as atypical lyrics make songs more interesting to listen to, a faster plot progression makes a story more stimulating. Rather than just plodding along, moving faster between more differentiated topics and ideas is more exciting, which leads audiences to react more favorably.
In addition, we found that within stories, there were times when plots should move faster and times when they should move more slowly. At the beginning of a book or movie, the canvas is blank. An audience doesnât know who the characters are, what the setting is, or how everything relates. So the beginning of a story sets the stage, building a base or jumping-off point for the rest of the narrative.
Starting slowly is key. It takes time for the audience members to digest the characters, their relationships, and everything else, so a plot that moves too quickly at the outset may confuse them.