For my second draft, I wised up. Instead of treating the entire book as one humongous project with a far-out deadline, I broke it down and promised my editors I would revise one chapter a week.
Suddenly, I became far more disciplined. If I wanted to hit my goal, I had to edit about two pages a night. Translated into these smaller milestones, it was easy to see that missing even a nightās worth of writing was a big deal because Iād have to make up for it to stay on track. I made good on my wordāmy efficiency tripled on the second draft.
Nothing worthwhile happens overnight. Every big dream is the culmination of thousands of tiny steps forward.
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Now, practically even better news than that of short assignments is the idea of shitty first drafts. All good writers write them. This is how they end up with good second drafts and terrific third drafts. People tend to look at successful writers, writers who are getting their books published and maybe even doing well financially, and think that they sit down at their desks every morning feeling like a million dollars, feeling great about who they are and how much talent they have and what a great story they have to tell; that they take in a few deep breaths, push back their sleeves, roll their necks a few times to get all the cricks out, and dive in, typing fully formed passages as fast as a court reporter. But this is just the fantasy of the uninitiated. I know some very great writers, writers you love who write beautifully and have made a great deal of money, and not one of them sits down routinely feeling wildly enthusiastic and confident. Not one of them writes elegant first drafts. All right, one of them does, but we do not like her very much. We do not think that she has a rich inner life or that God likes her or can even stand her.
I wrote that draft short assignment by short assignment, making each section, no matter how small or seemingly casual, as good as I could. I took out whole paragraphs that I loved, paragraphs Iād shoehorned into the book because I liked the writing or the image or the humor. I worked on it for eight or nine months, sending off the first third, which my editor was amazed by, and then the second section, which he loved. I finished the third section around the time I broke up with a man with whom Iād been involved for some time. I had a brainstorm: I would mail the third section off, borrow the money to fly to New York, and spend a week there, doing the line editing of the book with my editor and, at the same time, getting away from this man I was breaking up with. Also, I could collect the last third of the advance that Viking owed me and do a little retail therapy in New York City.
Writing by hand was important for me. I wasnāt staring at a screen, getting distracted by my email. A computer or a smartphone between you and the team is a huge barrier to focus and sends a clear message to everyone in the meeting: whatever Iām looking at on my screen is more important than you.
Even just taking notes on a computer was a nonstarter. Sometimes when Iām typing, I just . . . type. Whatever Iām writing down doesnāt make it all the way into my brain. But there was too much on the line for me to zone out, to not hear every word my team was saying.
The act of using a pen, then retyping and editing later, forced me to process information differently.
Every Sunday evening, I would go through my notes, reassess and reprioritize all my tasks, rifle through the good ideas, then update those papers on a computer and print out a new version for the week. Continually reprioritizing allowed me to zoom out and see what could be combined or eliminated. It let me spot moments when we were trying to do too much.
Those were the evenings when Iād realize why we were so overwhelmedāwe had said āyesā to too many things and we needed to start saying āno.ā And then came the hard work of figuring out what had to be delegated, what had to be delayed, and what had to be crossed off the list. I was forced to prioritize based on what really mattered, as opposed to what was just top of mind. That let me keep my eye on the bigger goals and milestones ahead of us, not just the fires at our feet or whatever feature we were most excited about that day.
Then Sunday night Iād email the whole list out to my management team. Each item had a name attached to it. Everyone could look at the top of the list to see what Iād be focused on that week, what they were accountable for, and what the next major milestones were.
And every Monday, weād have a meeting about it.
Everyone hated it. I literally watched people flinch when Iād bring out the papers, scanning them for the thing Iād been asking about for weeks. That thing Iād refuse to forget about because it hadnāt gotten crossed off the list yet. On June 3 you said it would be ready by the end of the month. Itās now Julyāwhatās the status of this project?
When I finished the novel I had a good feeling that Iād created my own writing style. My whole body thrilled at the thought of how wonderfulāand how difficultāit is to be able to sit at my desk, not worrying about time, and concentrate on writing. There were untouched veins still dormant within me, I felt, and now I could actually picture myself making a living as a novelist. So in the end the fallback idea of opening a small bar again never materialized. Sometimes, though, even now, I think how nice it would be to run a little bar somewhere.
Their best shot at it would be to work closely on the revisions in a focused way without interruption.
Morrison had just moved into her new home on the Hudson, and Bambara joined her there for three days as they went back and forth with edits and revisions to ready the book for publication. āSheād write and Iād edit some,ā Morrison recalled
She would go upstairs and work, then sheād run down the stairs and say, āWhat about this?ā Then I would sit down and go over that, then sheād run back up the stairs. It was the most amazingā but certainly extremely efficient, for usā way to do it, because she was so clear. She could focus immediately. I would just have to grunt and point and she knew exactly what I was suggesting.