Maybe youâve seen a mixing board in a recording studio, with rows of fader switches. A story can be thought of as a version of that mixing board, only with thousands of fader switches on itâthousands of decision points.
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Or imagine weâre bouncers, roaming through Club Story, asking each part, âExcuse me, but why do you need to be in here?â In a perfect story, every part has a good answer. (âWell, uh, in my subtle way, I am routing energy to the heart of the story.â)
Itâs hard to get any beauty at all into a story. If and when we do, it might not be the type of beauty weâve always dreamed of making. But we have to take whatever beauty we can get, however we can get it.
The boldness of this leap teaches us something important about the short story: it is not a documentary or rigorous accounting of the passage of time or a fair-minded attempt to show life as it is really lived; itâs a radically shaped, even somewhat cartoonish (when held up against the tedious real world) little machine that thrills us with the extremity of its decisiveness.
We might imagine a story as a room-sized black box. The writerâs goal is to have the reader go into that box in one state of mind and come out in another. What happens in there has to be thrilling and non-trivial.
Thatâs it.
What is the exact avor of the thrill? The writer doesnât have to know. Thatâs what heâs writing to find out.
But the story, in declining to answer (in obscuring the place where it might have answered), feels like itâs not avoiding the question but irradiating it with increased intensity.